Comments of chapter undefined of Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

The story is good, but you need to work on applying the master rule: "Show, don't tell". You're telling too much about what your characters are feeling or thinking. Show it instead of telling it! How? If he's frustrated, give your characterba frown, if he's happy, pull back the corners of his mouth, forming a smile, etc.Good work tho

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NEXT CHAPTER PLEASEEE 😭

Thanks for the chapter

really good chaopter!! keep it uo