DaoistDumbledore
This chapter felt like a mess to me. Imagine your first chemistry teacher starting their lecture with, "Ah! Look at what we have here! It's perfect! XXX-nitrate for the solution and YYY-oxygenaise as a reagent! Yes! Oh! And that platinum ring as a catalyst! Take it off at once! Hurry and begin the titration reactions now! Yes! Use that erlenmeyer beaker! No! Cover it! No air! Would you have any idea what was going on here other than some kind of chemistry madness? That's how this chapter felt. If you want to make your character seem clever, do the leg work for the foundational information before this ecstatic presentation. Astral what-and-what? Elemental disbalance? When have we ever heard that these were aspects of this cultivation world before now and that our MC has a firm grasp on all these details? Yes, they are common catch phrases in this genre, but they're also widely portrayed in different lights. You need to incorporate them into YOUR story before throwing them in our face for an 'exciting' scene.