Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated as a Jade Beauty?!
Reincarnated as a Jade Beauty?!
DaoistDumbledore
Chapter comments28
you did well describing it but it gets kinda annoying having to read about it in almost every chapter now especially when the chapters don't hold much of anything new to the story and we only get 1 a day besides that we haven't seen anything interesting about our dear mc for a while now because it's been all about the other sect members or other people and how talented they are or cool things they learned that mc wants but can't have like come on usually in this type of novel mc would get their first power up like 20 chapters ago and start training in it and have an initial understanding of it after another 20 chaps but all we got for hints of her future is an increase in talent and body cultivation like come on at least give her fist Intent or something
/Her/ description was pretty good. /His/ on the other hand felt lacking. Although, every time you mention /his/ past, it comes across as super pathetic. I'd think he'd have a more tailored personality to his deeds. Taking advantage of others' talents to rise? How about some self-justification about how identifying talented individuals /was/ his own talent. Or go the resentful route and say it was their fault for not being talented enough to avoid his manipulations? Either seems better fitted to a male personality in the modern era than self-depreciating thoughts while continuing to take advantage of others. That kind of mentality would usually only be present in shy-natured individuals that have been abused in the past. With thoughts more along the lines of, "forgive me for this, but if I didn't do it to you, someone else would be doing it to me." Which does not seem to be the image of our MC's past that you're striving for. Also, the bell artifact thing in combat just seemed so anti-climatic. I know random weird things like that are a staple of cultivation stories, but as an English-writer, tailoring out the lame bits derived from the Eastern nature of the genre is within your power! Rid the world of household-item artifacts and spirits that turn into chubby babies!
thanks for the chapter. it perfectly shows us that one can not just ascend to heaven in one step no matter how powerful the technique they have is. people are complaining about how MC is not strong but i feel that this is how it should be. one does not just miraculously transform from a coward that uses others for their own gain into the typical MC cultivators we are used to. the Author is doing well in showing that People do not just instantly change even if they want to and that it is a gradual process. now I don't mind seeing the MC become super powerful and fight across realms and using her techniques with absolute control but iIam satisfied with the way things are now and I am looking forward to how the MC will grow as a person.
