Comments of chapter undefined of Modern Family: Reincarnated in a TV show

This story seems to have good potential and for a first time author you’re good but you still need to give attention to the details for example there are no details in the timeskips, no mention of his parents since their appearance in CH 1, also concerning his family’s financial situation they should probably be the same or close to the dunphys since they live next door to them otherwise they’d live next to jay if they were rich. Also you’re rushing his singing/streaming journey he’s still too young you should ease the readers into it mention him playing video games with phil and luke sometimes or singing with one of his parents or something. Even though he has a part of lucifer’s soul it just explains his talent to learn fast in specific areas not everything should be instantaneous(sorry i know i mentioned this without knowing what you’re planning but alot of fanfics do the instant success thing and it annoys me because usually later on their mc’s work gets repetitive). This is just my own opinion take it or leave it it’s your choice i’m really excited to see what will you write in the future chapters. Ps. his nickname “nat” just makes me think it’s a girl named natalie (idk how to spell it) name him nathan if you want. Keep up the good work author. And also please dont drop this there is a serious lack of modern family fanfics