Maximus_Quill
And here I am! Mate, I can say that your work is shaping up just as good as DAD, if not better! Very interesting to read đ The only thing I donât like is him being very dense next to women, please change that asap, no need for shyness, for gods sake, as Mary would have said. What about Paige, genius girl? Would you introduce her? Maybe make her a bit older, so that she can be with PJ?
Hi! i really like your work! I noticed that you tried for a powerstone goal the previous chapters, I suggest increasing your uploading frequency. This is to increase the chances of people giving you power stones, as they refresh daily. Another reason is that people tend to forget, after we read a new chapter and give you power stones we forget to give you the stones for the rest of the week. I think i don't need to elaborate on the importance of powerstones and the ranking in helping you reach more readers. đ That's all and I hope this helps!