LuminousSkull
Hey, I liked this first chapter! Just a suggestion, as I see you're still making up your mind about harem. If there is a harem, please don't make a generic webnovel harem. It's not a problem if more than one girl likes him, the problem is what comes next. The famous cliffhanger of practically 90% of authors who do harem - a limbo where they throw away the story to focus only on the MC's s*xual relationship with the girls. For some reason they think it's a good idea to turn their work into just another generic p*rn*graphic story, that is, until they run out of ideas and end up dropping.