Might want to add a time skip or something, ngl. Seems like you need more practice writing young characters. Also, it said there was a puddle of blood and bones. But he only got rid of the bones.
This chapter was quite a hassle to make as I tried making Oki act like his age and I’m garbage at that, hope y’all enjoyed the chapter as it took some time to create.
I’ll try to get the next chapter out today but it all depends if I have time or not, after the sixth chapter is where the real thing starts so stay tuned for it.
