Now synopsis looks professional. I agree with ntr/yuri as thats partner sharing. But i dont understand why no inc#est? Thats a fantasy book and if you look around people really love it. MC has a mysterious background and he should have family. Whats wrong with a sexy mom and sisters?
You don't have to worry. The story is so far good.
And I guess it will be even more amazing as it is quite rare to read such novels these days in which an author focuses on the plot rather than the explicit scenes.
The world building is quite decent too albeit it does have some confusion(s).
That kind of synopsis is great. Lots of important info and you wont get the same questions over and over. No winc est is kinda sad, but thats how it is i guess đĽ˛. I ll leave you a proper review after 20chaps.
No problem, I can wait some time for lemons. You should think about changing your cover for something more fit for a cultivation book. When I scrolled new section, I almost missed your book.