Emmanuel_Capricorn
MC is basically a woman's dream, he's handsome, kind, smart, athletic but still netorare..... I've re-read the doujin, and can't find a reason for tsukimi to date a blonde, it's just a kiss photo, MC doesn't like the original protagonist who lacks anything, if the reason tsukimi is worried about mc is like being suspended or expelled, that's just nonsense, with MC skills he can easily enter a new school.... normally MC character development in stories is natural but using the content netorare feels ughh.......
I would've driven him away. It's good to see someone putting up humanity before his pride. I couldn't have done that had I been in that position. Yet it's good to see the silhouette of a great man building. Gg on character portrayal. I'd not like to see much of Tsukimi though. No any time soon. I believe She served her purpose well, it's time to put her on the back burner and maybe in the freezer. Now is time for the MC's character development. I hope you shed light on his emotional turmoil. How depressing it is. And I really hope you don't jump to romance for at least 5-6 chapters. In literature there's this sequence. After a break up, you show how one copes with it. The first few methods will be flawed. Which will have consequences that needs to be shown and some underlying ones that gets revealed sprinkled later on. After which the MC gains a sort of epiphany, works and overcomes the obstacles while this remains a lesson. After that you introduce a bit of romance again.
atleast ge did good, i mean, no matter what she did, ge stopped the worst thing possible and considering their relationship for a long time, its actually quite hard to automatically let go of someone you genuinely cared for, that is why we are hurt by their betrayal, so its more humanlike for him to go back and atleast make sure she is hime safe.