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Comments of chapter undefined of Honkai impact: Dimensional Herrscher

Genedrag
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Until this chapter it was a good story this chapter killed it for me.

Genedrag
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The story has barely even started yet the MC already is both immortal and has op skills that make him Invincible. Gluttony is an ultimate lv skill that the mc shouldn't be able to even possess right now it can be used to devower an entire Honkai eruption the fact he knows "multiple" martial arts as an orphan and was able to enter Chiba Academy that is supported to be a prestigious school for the rich and politically powerful that was already a plot hole. And world travel ticket should be more expensive at the very least 1000 points and the all worlds compatibility should be worth at least 10,000 points if it was a singal world compatability it should be atleast 100 points. There's no build up no growth your just buffing a lv 1 character until his stats are max while sometimes a op character is entertaining I was expecting something at least a little series not grabbing a bunch of op skills that should make him Invincible he already was a mantis with op potential beyond human why would he need a new body his should already be better than any human except maybe a demigod. The story just started he hasn't even had the first encounter in his own world or a chat room mission but he can all ready world hop and why would he reincarnate again into tensura he didn't die he doesn't need a new body he should just appear on the world and be given 1 to 3 normal skills and 1 unique skill not multiple unique and an ultimate skill like Gluttony. And I don't know if you know but the immortality from having a code means he himself cannot possess a gease a gease is created by forming a contract with someone possessing a code if the contract is deemed fulfilled the recipient lose there gease but gain the code/immortality from the contractor.

AdamFlores:This doesn't really say much. Can you specify which aspects 'killed' the story? This fan fiction isn't perfect, but without telling me what killed the story for you, I can't really improve in writing

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daoist832572
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in tensor there can be several people who have the same unique skill as well as the extra skills but they cannot have the same ultimate skill. Good chapter

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Guionista
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Although his Geass power is strong, it has a drawback, there are many kinds of love (family, your pet, self-love, yandere love, etc.), using this power could cause someone to love him like a pet xd

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Ulescu_Mihai
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Gonna save shizue izawa in the future?

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mainmangog
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drunken_fitter
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garbage, hero OP, what is the point of the further story?

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Shurasik
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Thanks for the chapter

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Joker333
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Thanks for the chapter

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Gerier
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LeficiosTV
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Thanks for the chapter.

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ThiccThighs
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thx for chap

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Kyaa_
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Thanks for the chapter!

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zeraf
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thanks for the chapter

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DaoistXfbqfn
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thanks for the chapter author

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Shadic21
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Thanks for the chapter.

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Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

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Ulescu_Mihai
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Thanks for the chapter ☺️

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NewYuuki
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Should've went with Unique kill Wise-one instead of Great Sage because it's the Upgrade ver before sacrificing Shizu Unique skill as energy to upgraded as Raphael

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HOS
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Well Love Geass fit the theme since his power came from C.C. which also have a Love Geass.

Vitor_Lindo
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Deus e muito clichês cara hum raposa o hum dragão seria interessante