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Comments of chapter undefined of Traveling the Frozen Earth

Michael_v1
Michael_v1AuthorMichael_v1

In hindsight, I could have immediately had the character kill the animal for meat. But the thought of it didn't occur to me and it seemed a bit cruel. Too much dilemma, drama, debate and group dynamic. Also extremely dark for the second chapter. I'm trying to not introduce too much internal drama and conflict unless it's for the plot.