Yea, that's it for me. Good luck with the story. I can point out a lot of things I'd consider negative, like your character being overall unlikable, or your incessant need to repeat yourself over and over again, but overall this has just been annoying to read.
thanks for the story so far but I can't go on. I enjoy the concept. the idea feels thought out but reading it is like reading the inner monolog of a chunni. it IS getting better with more substance and less filler. so I'll look you up to see if u have any other works in a few months
Just don’t nerf his abilities I hate that caz people like yhwach walking around with fate manipulation and some authors just nerfing their MC like bruh
