MiracleBringer
each chapter of this novel is very good but I feel like the story is very slow. This is my own opinion and please don't get angry if this offend you in anyway.You are concentrating on DXD characters which is good for plot building but you are going overboard. I know it is necessary for world-building but you totally forget about fate characters.Kingu/Enkidu don't have any effect on story so far and you totally forget about Bedivere. He don't have any significant impact on the story. He only come and through the broken sword into lake.Also you don't show us how the personality of Asia change that much. I believe showing the change in personality of Asia is more important than the conversation between Freed and Xenovia.Also I think that you can give some information to three faction about the strength of demon gods because it will be boring to see them die like a chicken. But still I love this novel. This is one of the few fan faction that I loved because almost every fan faction have huge harem and less world building. It really irritates me when girls fall in love with MC in one or three chapters. I hope you don't do that.