Comments of chapter undefined of The Demon Empress's Husband is a Part-time Hero

Well after reading the caught up chapters of dragon monarch here i am. love the change of pace with this book and cannot wait for further chapters, congrats on starting a second book don't ruin my favourite anytime soon haha.Yours truly The_Hatchman long time reader/ first time commenter

I think you're making too many unnecessary descriptions. For example, I saw in at least 10 paragraphs that he wanted a comfortable life for his daughter and that he wanted to protect her and grow up well. You wrote it once, that's enough. Not necesary telling many times. That's why I skipped some paragraphs and read it. I think if you don't want people to get bored, reduce the unnecessary things you say.

Good chapitre

To be honest, I don't even understand what I've read so far. Too many things at once

Poor Aimee

is there a characters illustration?