Bro it's really cool!. You got this so much right!. And you said the things that I need to know so I could know what they do when using a skill!. Gonna keep reading!
if my writing is this smooth and clear, I would've won tournaments.
The only thing I could say about the plot is that it's easygoing but I didn't feel anything cuz I've read hundreds of this. but if I was a first-time reader, I would've felt the thrill coming inside me.
