Comments of chapter undefined of Git Gud Or Die Trying (hiatus)
Git Gud Or Die Trying (hiatus)
Wicked132
Chapter comments9
Until now, it's a copy and paste of the dialogue along with a description of what it does and feels, it's okay to say it's a slow story but the world of Elden Ring is stupidly big and not to mention the confusing lore. Speed up the Limgrave part and continue the story and slow development.
I'm kinda with OP, it's a slog to read through these long monotonous descriptions... I like setting the tone and atmosphere as much as the next guy, but not when it slows the pace of the story to a crawl. You're leaving readers with three options, continue reading the descriptions to stay in the story, skip past them to things of substance, or push them to abandon it all together. For me good writing is primarily in how succinctly you can convey your meaning. Plus, for fanfics, in a universe most of your readers have already experienced, describing every nitty gritty detail is unnecessary.
Wicked132:Did you read about the part about me slandering your mother in the synopsis if you complain about the pace? Yes? No? It doesn't matyer. Your mom is a hoe.
