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SASUKE: The Fanfiction

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Desire96
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That's some insane level of writting, I don't even know whether you used Ai or something, If you did it manually, then that must have been some insane level of effort you put into it...

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Raven_Aelwood
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I only use AI for proofreading and line editing. Not even the paid version of chatgpt can write properly coherent prose that would stand up to scrutiny

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Rk6T
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Bro I don’t understand what’s going on, so far it’s no different from cannon, sasuke keeps talking as if he is more than one Individual. Also this style of writing is kind of annoying (not saying it’s bad or wrong) but it breaks the immersion one has towards the narutoverse, it doesn’t suit it.

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ArielBender
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are two souls inside sasuke?

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FosterChild
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Omnious 👀👀

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Deadrule_vivek
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definitely well written and hence definitely better than a lot of fanfics

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DaoistmXBnrL
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GODKINGASH
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Nice

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Maulann
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We hahahaha weee weweee our weeweeeeee hahaha lol. Wa are weee areeeee

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ItsDragonking
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what i don't under stand

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iLeech
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Did he kill the nurse's father? Confusing.

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