SandKastle
Yeah it’s getting super forced now, before it was funny because him being constantly unlucky with no stakes is a nice gag. However now that there is stakes and with him making obvious mistakes, it’s a bit much. I get the whole him not being OP, but there’s a limit, he can’t get anything done by himself and all conflict has been forced. AND you’ve said that it’s gonna get worse. That’s a shame, you started off so well and the quality is amazing, it’s just the conflict making it feel like it’s just to flex the black cat image. Perhaps after it gets “worse” it improves.
Ok. June actions are resulting a very disappointing outcome. Why he is behaving like a stupid kid who doesn't know anything about the underworld?. I'm angry and disappointing about this chapter and the previous one chapter of the plot. Is not suitable or ideal with the character of him so far. It's not make sense to me. My humble thoughts.
well i've already foreseen this, the plot getting ridiculous at this point everything is so fk1ng forced, it's deteriorating fast. if it's only one thing it's not that bad, but for the past 150 chaps? the plot feeling so forced, and filled with so much dramas that are similar? nah im dropping this garbage
idk about the rest but I love it so far. everyone ones saying this and that like the whole story just changed author but I don't mind the different conflicts. since the first time he died til now he hasn't dealt with the old gang til now. his demeanor makes sense and we know he's op so he'll figure out everything like a g.
I'm sorry dear author, I like this novel, I really do and it's high quality, especially considering that were on Webnovel, but I fear you've fallen in the delusion a lot of authors face at some point...where to make the villain take the limelight for the plot they make the MC's IQ drop. I know June isn't supposed to me OP (which he kinda is anyway since the system and all, not complaining about it btw), but he's supposed to be smarter than this, smarter than someone like Lin Zhi...
Weird Lin Zhi wasn't curious about how June understood his conversation with Laohu in Chinese. Granted an aspiring idol being fluent in other languages such as Chinese is not unusual, but he didn't even make a mention of it. June also could've played dumb first by pretending to not understand Chinese, but he didn't even try to do that.