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Comments of chapter undefined of Free-zing

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Shadow011
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Could use some work

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Md_Azahar_4695
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keep at it going great

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QuinnKey
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I got confused đŸ€” why did you merge two chapters? I thought his awake then after absorbing that stone it didn't say the he fell asleep again. 😅 anyway I'm also doing 1st-person POV for the first time, I use this kind of POV on my 3rd chapter. đŸ„°

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DaoistE5CDyA
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Superb

Ariba_Afifa
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Loved it

Humayun_kabir_23
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I liked the start! It was so detailed.