Devils_hand
im going to be real with you. a lot of people will leave you book. then when you see nobody reading it will drop. i dont know how you expected us to react to this. i would advise you to rewrite the chapter.
it's not that this chapter is badmost readers read your book because of naruto now you are upgrading his enemies and mainly sasuke using his cellswe all have seen how powerful madara is after getting hashirama cells and even awakened Rinnegan.Now will sasuke also open Rinnegan?
Devils_hand:thanks bro,,, i appreciate your support. but what could i say about people... i can't please everyone, but just read some next chapters i hope you will understand, one chapter didn't make the whole book wrong and this was not even a bad chapter, ..