Seiji_Shura
Yeah, the chapter was good. But I will recommend something. Use Grammarly app to edit your chapter's grammar. The plot is solid and it kept me reading the whole chapter in one sitting which is quite abnormal for me so yeah, keep up the good work
then use chat gpt as well. it improves the prose and you can tell if a section of the chapter is good or not. If you're confused, ask away
Seiji_Shura:đ I use grammarly and Google docs at the same time. Look like it's not enough