Comments of chapter undefined of Restart: The World Savior's New Beginning

Pertamax 🍟🍕🍔 Thanks for the Chapter 😎📖🍻

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Yikes, this at the very least needs to be run through Grammarly.

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Ok so subject verb agreement is a big issue for you, as well as the word “though” (not “tho,” you’re not texting bro you’re writing a book). Otherwise looks like this novel might be fun, I love FMCs so I’m excited to see where this goes if I can get through the poor grammar!

I feel like this was written by a reclusive gaming addict in 4th grade

No romance? If there wasn't, I'd probably read to the end

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