Azia_Elise
I know a LOT of people have already said this but, HE SOLD HIS WIFE'S SOUL! Such an undeserving man! And who gives up after being unemployed for a week, most people go months without giving up, not to mention the guy didn't even read the contract! Besides the major logical issues above, I do really like the premise of world building, I wonder how it was play out.
I really want to get into this novel because the concept is really good, but why lock the chapters at 5? That's way too early. I know you said you're new to this, but that's significantly too early for a story to lock. Most readers won't be able to make it passed 5 chapters. I'm still gonna read the rest of the free chapters.