Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth in the Dragon Ball Universe as a saiyan
Rebirth in the Dragon Ball Universe as a saiyan
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All great wishes, but the system, in my opinion, is a bit too much. Sense it would make lots of his wishes completely irrelevant if it had a shop cause then he could have just bought most of the things he wished. Making some of the wishes completely a waste. Unless, of course, you're not going to add a shop, but with you having a currency to it, then there's probably bound to be one. All the wishes except for two are really good ones that make sense and have a lot of potential except for the system and system points, which don't really make sense considering the wishes he made that could have been bought in the store. But this is your story, so you do you
That's great. This way, his wishes weren't pointless. With the shop not being able to be used until he becomes an Ssg, he'll have to work a lot harder to get stronger than just buying something from the shop. This will make it a lot better than him having everything handed to him on a silver plater. This way, you'll be able to give him better character development and have him interact with a lot more characters. You good give him some mentors to train but not make it easy for him and lots more