Kaiszer
Rip, the idea for this novel was quite good and it already showed plenty of improvements from your first fanfic.
Kaiszer:really? Anyway I am not gonna drop it just not stable updates
You're not feeling it because you essentially recapped last chapter and did not charge forward. However. You want to write a HP. Fic.. Maybe.... What if the uzumaki here, use a reverse summoning technique or space time technique and in doing so find a way to leave this reality other than Kamui or Kaguya. What if they end up in the Potterverse or perhaps something challenging like star wars, forcing them to adapt to a completely new world and reality... Perhaps that forest world on the edge of wild space that was in one of the later movies where the lightsaber was in that chest. They could establish themselves there as natives or something, and try to use their ways to make inroads.... Or maybe send them to game of thrones, put them on skagos or something lol but without technology, magic or Jedi to keep them in check they'd be unchallenged so maybe not. Either way you could turn it into a crossover.