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Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of Uzumaki

Simoncso
SimoncsoLv11Simoncso

Rip, the idea for this novel was quite good and it already showed plenty of improvements from your first fanfic.

The_Uchiha_Ghost
The_Uchiha_GhostLv2The_Uchiha_Ghost

Don't drop its good

Kaiszer:really? Anyway I am not gonna drop it just not stable updates
TruthAlfa
TruthAlfaLv4TruthAlfa

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AuroraFlower30303
AuroraFlower30303Lv4AuroraFlower30303

Good chapter here.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

You're not feeling it because you essentially recapped last chapter and did not charge forward. However. You want to write a HP. Fic.. Maybe.... What if the uzumaki here, use a reverse summoning technique or space time technique and in doing so find a way to leave this reality other than Kamui or Kaguya. What if they end up in the Potterverse or perhaps something challenging like star wars, forcing them to adapt to a completely new world and reality... Perhaps that forest world on the edge of wild space that was in one of the later movies where the lightsaber was in that chest. They could establish themselves there as natives or something, and try to use their ways to make inroads.... Or maybe send them to game of thrones, put them on skagos or something lol but without technology, magic or Jedi to keep them in check they'd be unchallenged so maybe not. Either way you could turn it into a crossover.

Insane_Fantasy
Insane_FantasyLv4Insane_Fantasy

tftc~~~○● that was short.

SERGI_UNIVERSE
SERGI_UNIVERSELv1SERGI_UNIVERSE

keep spirit bro write it don't take long to update it

SERGI_UNIVERSE
SERGI_UNIVERSELv1SERGI_UNIVERSE

Great, please make Konoha regret Kushina, stay with Minato, take Minato

Carnic_321
Carnic_321Lv4Carnic_321

tftc i will ask the age old question of is this a Harem fic also will his ability grow stronger/evolve at all?

Wolfboy123r
Wolfboy123rLv13Wolfboy123r

all the good ones dropped