Supreme_Slaughter
part 2 lesson, let me teach you the different between [" ", ' ', ( ), and *] (this is what I know, different author may have different uses) " " - when subject is talking, you already know this. ' ' - is when the subject is not saying anything but it is in his mind!!! ex: 'I will keep fighting and sleeping while armstrong is busy doing nothing'. ( ) - is author or translator's notes. ex: (this writer is new so idk)(IHS-International Hunter School, or is it?). and the * is the surroundings sounds. ex: the bird is loudly chirping *chirp chirp, or the car is beeping *Beep *beep.So I won't comment about the story because it is still new, so let me say something to motivate you... RELEASE MORE CHAPTERRSSSS!!!!!!
I'll be honest here, in this part I already forgot the name of the MC, I only remember armstrong because the name was well-known. So let me teach you about the perspectives. 1st person perspective - is when the character is using the 'I' in the paragraph. ex: I will keep fighting while sleeping. 2nd person perspective - is when the author is explaining the subject. ex: Alex will keep fighting while sleeping. 3rd person pers. - is when the other subject is talking about another subject. ex: Armstrong strongly says that "Alex will keep fighting while sleeping."