Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece : My Revenge

i got irritated on the first and middle part, well the last part is a good one so i give it a pass.

You know, I think Luffy is the only person there from canon who couldn't kill himself easily. His durability is way higher than his output at this moment.

Well all that left is killing Rayleigh now and killing garp and whitebeard and others who caused his downfall like sengoku. Tho I want to see the horror of straw hats when they heard luffy's death and shanks horror when he finally hears the news of luffy's defeat

In all honesty, this story is amazing! A villain, who wants to harm, who you normally consider the good guy. Rip Whitebeard and everyone else. Would be cool, if you have Luffy die and maybe have the fruit be taken, since if awakened, no one could pose a challenge, so whoever eats the fruit, will be an amazing crew member. And shanks, Garp and dragon would be mad, which means more action for the mc

it's good if Luffy, Kid and Law died and Carnes take their fruit

Luffy dying would be amazing. Especially Ace, Dragon, Garp and shanks reaction. And the strawhats obviously.

Thanks for the chapter

If you had a way to take the Gomu Gomu no Mi,it would be rad.Manipulating reality to your will.So cool

Thanks for the chap KILL LUFFY!!!!!!

are you going to add familiars because I recommend the bunny from blood c

Yeeesssss, Kill luffy Zehahahaha

More than half of the chapter stuffed

Thats it guyz the novel ended!!

TYSMFTC

That escalated quickly HOLY. Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the update

yes . finally thank you for the chapter . please make tomorrow's chapter also long like this one .