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Comments of chapter undefined of Shinigami Of The Marvel World

AvaCeciliaGrace
AvaCeciliaGraceLv14AvaCeciliaGrace

Author must be trolling the readers because this is past reasonable levels of ridiculous. SIMPLE IS BEST. I am dropping this novel even though I really love the concept and am a big fan of bleach/marvel. Maybe if its rewritten or changed ill try to reread in the future but this pretentious, ( or trolling) writing style really kills any ability to enjoy reading it.

Misifus_7w7
Misifus_7w7Lv3Misifus_7w7

You keep doing that, trying to fill in parts where you don't have to fill in, to reach your set word count.

Fi3l
Fi3lLv14Fi3l

Did anyone else find these 14 chapters boring or was it just me? Granted we’re still a couple chapters in and the MC’s focus is to fix SS first so I’ll wait a bit more

unIReap
unIReapLv14unIReap

whenever is the story going to start or is this a bleach filler fic?

Darquesse
DarquesseLv6Darquesse

Putting aside the flowery essay writing style, it feels like you hit enter after every comma for some reason. Just leave them as paragraphs.

INDRA32
INDRA32Lv5INDRA32

Thanks for the chapter

Angledark
AngledarkLv5Angledark

Good Chapter