It's not a bad start. I like that the MC has been building himself since he set foot on the new world instead of the basic "starter town" we get from most works.this work might actually amount to something I'll read all the way through. keep up the good work Taosnothing!
so a group humans are surrounding a soul stealing demon. do you a support your fellow man. b kill your fellow man for the xeno who's legal status and safety are unknown, or c. stay neutral and tail them back to civilization.