Comments of chapter undefined of Into the wizarding world as Neville Longbottom
Into the wizarding world as Neville Longbottom
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3 I think the werewolf could be an great idea, in the forest make him dress as a werewolf to scare Malfoy, bonus objective 1 : make Malfoy faint objective 2 : make Malfoy think he was bitten by the werewolfmain reward : full control when transformedBonus reward 1 : ability to transform whenever he wants, independantly of the moonBonus reward 2 : additionnal animagus form of a direwolf/fenrir/any badass wolf making him vulnerable only to an ancient/holy aconite.for a spell or power... a zanpakuto ? with enough training he could kill dementors by book 3
3 - I think the rank 2 reward would be interesting if done correctly and would prefer it over the other options (could he gain immunity to sunlight through a reward of blue spider lilys later? Because this could make it difficult for you to write otherwise) and if he were a demon how would he avoid eating humans. The ones I would prefer the most in order of most to least are Demon, basilisk gaze, linguist, werewolf. Also for a challenge to scare malfoy you could have the system make him bring a werewolf costume to the forbidden forest when he is split up and separated from malfoy dress as a werewolf and scare malfoy (it’s hinted that malfoy has a massive fear with anything to do with werewolfs) for a reward I have no idea, you could give him the blue spider lily early but that depends on if he becomes a demon and if you want him to be immune to sunlight immediately or wait until later so we see some of his struggles with sunlight and hunger for human flesh, or just give him whatever you want because this is your story and I’m probably being annoying. Feel free not to answer any questions that give major spoilers, love the story so far can’t wait for the next chapter!
1. I won't mind abilities from other verses but with some restraint and harder rarity considering his current universe.2. With so many magic abilities and spells in different universes I expected him to get more things like that example: doctor strange spells/ knowledge, danmachi chants exc. Also some draws like minor magic growth and understanding3. First place but the werewolf has possibilities it would give him a reason to focus on and recruit werewolves in his community the better reason to look into cures in case he wins one, and another interesting point was he could roll and get the lycan ability from underworld where the werewolves are strong but can control their transformations making a whole new breed or even fixing the werewolf problem.5. I forget who but someone else said for his mission with draco he could dress up as a werewolf to scare him I thought it seem like a pretty funny concept and a very daring move especially if he gets the werewolf curse like a form of foreshadowing.
