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Comments of chapter undefined of Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger

Lucifer7030
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yeah no

VJ2021_Hallo
VJ2021_HalloLv4VJ2021_Hallo

I am sorry but this is getting weird he is acting like he is an anime character.But this is a completely different genre of fiction, with its own rules and its more grounded in reality. He looks stupid

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JV1
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I don’t even know what’a going on anymore

KingKarma_1766
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I dont like this different persona stuff it's kinda cringe well I guess this ain't for me author. goodbye

CrazeR
CrazeRLv11CrazeR

thank you for the chapter and i would like to apologise for my past comments .......but i personally still dont like the mc outfit .

Lee_Gregory
Lee_GregoryLv4Lee_Gregory

This chapter was pointless and didn't progress the story forward at all. The character quirks don't work either as they bring down the writing quality. I know he is doing it on purpose, but sometimes it gets too much. Eminence of Shadow does this same quirk well enough without going too far. I love Earth 65 Peter as a concept, so I'll see how it goes. Sometimes, the character being more serious than goofy, multiple personality is a better thing. Especially in this situation.

lick_ma_balls
lick_ma_ballsLv14lick_ma_balls

really hope this cringe shi ends soon it's bringing down the story so much which sucks cuz it started out so good

sayanth_sk
sayanth_skLv13sayanth_sk

the story is still in the early stages and the mc is strong enough to treat this as a vacation which I find hilarious, but I do hope things get serious soon as there is only so much humour that can keep your interest for a period of time

Mvlware
MvlwareLv14Mvlware

I’m not really digging all the personalities, but everything else has been fairly interesting so far. Seems spastic but its got its moments. Maybe its not my humor

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4Haku_Ouroboros

Es todo confuso y desordenado.

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Saeko_Kaburagi
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I really dunno why so many people out here commenting all this destructive criticism. It's simple. Don't like how the MC acts? Don't read it. The purpose of reading and writing a fic is to have fun.

Sandford_96
Sandford_96Lv5Sandford_96

Honestly the spiders meeting up in nwh was amazing I don't know how you managed to ruin but you did with this silly mc anime stuff.

John_Wolfie
John_WolfieLv1John_Wolfie

I'm confused butloving it! He's treating this like a vacation,isn't he?

Gerier
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ASUN
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OLB
OLBLv3OLB

well, I'll look for something else to read, I've had enough of this soulless ff

Wopeh
WopehLv4Wopeh

He's in a different universe, he can act however he pleases because he isn't going to see most, if any, of them again. He's having fun with it and I like it. Would like either longer chapters or more progress though.

_Monarch
_MonarchLv13_Monarch

thanks for the chapter

KaitoSuzuki
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thanks for the chapter

GodOfDegenerates
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Thanks for the chapter

Veinydique
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TFTC.