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Comments of chapter undefined of VRMMORPG: Legendary Level Zero

Antihero2
Antihero2Lv14Antihero2

If she’s sorry why doesn’t she do anything to the knight who tried to behead the mc

Caveman21
Caveman21Lv15Caveman21

I was pretty harsh on a comment I made last chapter, that I have deleted. BUT the truth remains that the only person so far in your novel that seems to have a functioning brain is the main character. This leads to super boring and one sided character development. Great characters are great for their independence and personal power. People being idiots to drive the point on how great the MC is just lazy, and far too often portrayed on this platform. I know this may seam harsh, but side characters need a brain too - or else it just seems like a children’s cartoon. Great for kids, terribly dull for adults.