Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: The Golden Viper

Hope you get well soon bro , as for the pacing of the story , i feel it could go a little faster thats all . untill now i really loved the stroy of bryan and his charecter development .

pacing could be sped up but only really when it revolves around the original story, though I still like it, I would recommend not changing it, clearly it's working so speeding things up may ruin the pacing. I would love to see some more wizard fights well then to go into more detail.would like to know if there is gonna be any romantic aspects to this novel ?

thanks for the chapter

imo the pacing for the story is good, but I feel like you have spent a little too much time focusing on thr third book, as in the Sirius part, and I hope that we would get to the "big reveal" and pettigrew getting caught sooner.

Get well soon. The pacing is too slow, because it's too diluted by unnecessary interactions and dialogues. Sometimes a conversation spans 4-7 chapters. I also think the interaction with the golden trio is just a way to basically copy paste the book, you might as well focus more on other characters like Draco, Cedric or even Percy. An arc with the purebloods would be great as well. I have no idea about your reference books, but I did read a lot of CN HP FFs and they mostly go stale even the good ones. If you think the original source' quality is not up to par, I think nobody would stop you or complain if you fully own up the direction of this fanfic.

Get well soon dear author, Yea the pace of the story is a bit slow but i am not complaining as ling as you are consistent and complete the story