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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: The Golden Viper

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Flygrass
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Its the magical world so the author should make use of all the things in hp world dont focua on the hp plot there much more than the plot

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Siuuu
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after your rewrite its much smoother and there are less spelling mistakes

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Blue_Sky_123
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Daoist_Dan
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I'm super glad to hear you've edited. I was just about ready to swear off mtl HP fics. The ones I found today have been...

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TruthAlfa
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đŸ‘đŸ»đŸ‘đŸ»

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Tyler_Henline_7485
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Mann_Teufortian
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seems very Magus of the Warlock world so far

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Burner_Acc_1957
Burner_Acc_1957Lv4Burner_Acc_1957

Wow this is a great start!

Bro_is_bored
Bro_is_boredLv4Bro_is_bored

good start author 👍👍

Dracul91
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I need good fanfiction to read...on here or fanfiction(dot)net

Zachariah_Browning_8961
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Buy the troll and hire all the elves

God_of_penguins
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Thanks for the chapter dude