Comments of chapter undefined of Hollywood: Head-Hunting System
Hollywood: Head-Hunting System
TheRamenLord
Chapter comments18
sorry if my criticism was harsh. Just felt it could have been written better. The problem with an MC making an original film, if it's a combination of 2 movies like Joker and dark Knight, but their background doesn't mesh well in the plot, it just becomes a mess. His descent into Joker became rushed and confusing. His lost hope besides the miraculous benefactor Spector insert, the improvised dialogue felt out of place or a bit cringe in the scenes of the last 2 chapters, and I don’t understand the motivations of Joker here nor did his whole moral quandary about the hospital, I assume it was meant to be like Batman with choosing who to save? Instead, he has a choice of killing himself, a whole hospital of innocents, and Joker. Or killing nobody. Not a hard choice
Author my opinion, I thought that combining the Dark knight and joker films doesn't seem right to me, the MC should make the Joker film alone with perhaps few introductions of other characters to set up the universe, then when the MC acquires DC he would do or a Batman's initial film and then combining the two in Dark Knight or just Dark Knight, I know it's just a novel but combining these two films into one doesn't seem realistic to me, either it's going to be a 5 hour film or it's going to be very rushed which doesn't match the pace of the Joker movie.
