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Comments of chapter undefined of A JEDI IN WESTEROS

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Dragonwings1234
Dragonwings1234Lv2Dragonwings1234

Good. Very good.

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nunya_business_3493
nunya_business_3493Lv4nunya_business_3493

Why is the MC so dumb? He could have left during the night with a weapon that can cut thru the cell door....

Akisu
AkisuLv13Akisu

There are a lot of grammatical mistakes, and worse than that, a lot of names are written wrongly, which bothers me a lot more since those can just be copy & pasted, so to fail in even that... The idea itself is interesting, but I'm not quite sure about the execution of said idea, since as I said there are quite a few mistakes and I don't much like the start itself, as it took 8 chapters for something to actually happen. =/

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DeenoTheFallen
DeenoTheFallenLv13DeenoTheFallen

preciate the chapter .

Dredd44
Dredd44Lv13Dredd44

it's as if the mc is growing dumber.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

ForAsguard
ForAsguardLv1ForAsguard

What? Kill him and deal with problem later... isn't that a safe passage? Even if it true he had a message it doesn't matter, now that he xclaim about the message being destroyed we can works it with our Smith or something

Bruhs
BruhsLv2Bruhs

MC sofre de demência, personagem muito ruim, tinha tudo para ser um obra muito boa mas deu ruim.