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Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits

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ChaosMaster
ChaosMasterLv14ChaosMaster

Don’t really know if the the editing tool made a difference but I don’t notice any mistakes be it grammatical or wording.

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SleepDeprivedSloth
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hm. the tool is better than i thought even grammarly said chapters r better than usual. keke

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ChaosMaster
ChaosMasterLv14ChaosMaster

Author we need 4th circle …….growth has entered stagnant.

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Omkar_Abhang
Omkar_AbhangLv11Omkar_Abhang

author please don't add separation plot between elara and Vann due to circumstances. like every novel has it . story going very well and looking forward to it. growth of both Vann and elara side by side together. please don't add separation or misunderstanding and then Vann chasing her to meet like every novel.

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ChaosMaster
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Fikabussen
FikabussenLv15Fikabussen

Different but not in a bad way. Just wish for 2 chapters a day!!

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Yar_Shadow
Yar_ShadowLv4Yar_Shadow

Thanks for the chapter

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oonnms
oonnmsLv13oonnms

still amazing

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Flo_xyz
Flo_xyzLv15Flo_xyz

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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