Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter : The Cardmaster Chronicles

I feel like the first 4 or so paragraphs said almost the same thing.

I want to say that you are making your writings very complicated. How can he find a perfect size clothes so easily? And did he transmigrated to a child's body? Why was he in the middle of the street? Your writing doesn't explain anything. How can everything have a mystery in it? It was just clothes. How can it become so complicated?

Whole image of him just picture him smaller and kind of keanu reeves vives

So he’s 5 when he’s doing all this?

thanks again for another really wonderful and exciting chapter