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Comments of chapter undefined of I Become a Writer in Konoha

Huako
HuakoLv14Huako

Why is the he/she mixing problem so prevalent jesus it’s annoying!

franta_frantik
franta_frantikLv4franta_frantik

I hope this improves, a few more chapters reading like this and I might get an aneurysm from the grammar.

Dakota_Morrison
Dakota_MorrisonLv4Dakota_Morrison

it's a he or a she, PICK ONE. you really need to reread your chapter to check for mistakes before posting them. especially if you making this many mistakes happens. and considering you haven't said anything about suddenly switching genders for the mc then I'm going to assume it's still male.

Chronosign
ChronosignLv4Chronosign

I think you mean iconic smile not ironic.

Daniel_Brennan_0577
Daniel_Brennan_0577Lv13Daniel_Brennan_0577

the name of the changed from Iwanami to Yanami. And also, I'm not understanding which store Yuya is in. Maruzendo or the other one? and fix the Maruzendo names, keep them consistent.

SCP_UnKnown
SCP_UnKnownLv14SCP_UnKnown

Hm

SirJuan_Juan
SirJuan_JuanLv14SirJuan_Juan

Good Chapter 👍

CoffeeLovers
CoffeeLoversLv1CoffeeLovers

tell me the original name of chinese novel please