Comments of chapter undefined of Avater LARPer Number 1

Avater LARPer Number 1

vtorx_0867

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vtorx_0867Authorvtorx_0867

But that will make the story a slice of life. I wrote this to deal with the issue of Gotham. Having the powers just to run away literally kills everything. and as you can see from the title, something'' gotta happen to create a rampage

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Nerull128Lv4Nerull128

I like it. Just don't kill someone from his family anymore because you will spoil the novel. Maybe make so that he can earn some money and his family can get better place move cities to be safe. Overall the novel is very good.

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WarMachine78Lv14WarMachine78

Thanks for the chapter P.S. Where Victor Zazz get his desserts and his beginning of Dead Reckoning after the Darkness makes appearance ( see"s if he can survive the MC deadly game of Hide and Seek ,wether or not Victor survives remains to be seen ? But we all know better don't we,Let the games begin Hahaha!

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Anthony_Jordan_9477Lv4Anthony_Jordan_9477

Good chapter

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