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Comments of chapter undefined of I really don't want to open a harem here

JFM_23
JFM_23Lv11JFM_23

This mc idiot..loke all chinese mc

SinX_Five
SinX_FiveLv4SinX_Five

Thanks for the chapter it felt good to take that pig down eheheheh

Luisz_Rodriguez
Luisz_RodriguezLv3Luisz_Rodriguez

Xzeo
XzeoLv2Xzeo

There is no police with the proof he have so the coach get fired (sorry for my english it´s not my language) and thx for the chapter 😊

Reiken_Ancalagon_1451
Reiken_Ancalagon_1451Lv4Reiken_Ancalagon_1451

The English is so bad.😔

whitethief274
whitethief274Lv4whitethief274

hey author can you please change his name to be something more rememberable .

MarinXGrayfia
MarinXGrayfiaLv4MarinXGrayfia

gg grammar

S1LV3RS
S1LV3RSLv4S1LV3RS

bruh, its too much grammar, fected am i, right?

1234mm
1234mmLv51234mm

🥰🥰🥰

EroFan
EroFanLv4EroFan

lol, the conversation is pretty random, its like they talk about 1 thing by exchanging 2 or 3 sentences then skip ahead some details and talk about another topic without full context. as if it doesn't matter as long as they are talking. conversation usually allows the reader to understand more of a characters personality so its quite an important factor in writing a story, once done right, the author wouldn't need to spoon feed the readers about the fact about his character, he just have to show it through their actions based on their individual personalities... but this, this is trash...

DomDomDomDom
DomDomDomDomLv4DomDomDomDom

Even though the story is great, most of the time. I don't understand the flow of conversation.

Nale_Sheeeeeee
Nale_SheeeeeeeLv4Nale_Sheeeeeee

The pronouns like please. Then again, MTL struggles with japanese, chinese and other moon runes.

One_Singularity
One_SingularityLv14One_Singularity

Tftc

dragon_shadow1276
dragon_shadow1276Lv3dragon_shadow1276

Thanks for the chapter

Hammer_Black
Hammer_BlackLv4Hammer_Black

Gracias por el capítulo

Demon_Of_Lust
Demon_Of_LustLv3Demon_Of_Lust

It's a great scene

Hakkira
HakkiraLv14Hakkira

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁

DRACONIAN619
DRACONIAN619Lv13DRACONIAN619

thanks again for another really wonderful and exciting chapter

DaoistF0koDD
DaoistF0koDDLv1DaoistF0koDD

gracias por el capitulo

DaoistMdFPvj
DaoistMdFPvjLv1DaoistMdFPvj

Tftc ntr those hoe