Comments of chapter undefined of Planets At Rise
Planets At Rise
Kemzxl
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Take into perspective they are just kids. Anyways I can only blame my lack of skill as a writer the story does get better I believe but if the beginning is too displeasing for you, then thank you for at least giving it a chance ArchProgenitor.
ArchProgenitor:You misled me enough for me to temporarily drop this from annoyance..... I wished he had killed Terra... It's like everyone else only performs to the requirement of the plot... no limits... Vitto is way too emotional, Cyrus is being overbuffed by plot, and Edith is getting annoying... I hope you can at least stop being so vague and mysterious with the plot...