LordHornZ
I appreciate the effort put into this piece, but it feels somewhat lacking in its understanding of cultivation tropes. I never read Against the Gods to be honest but I would like a more deep view. Additionally, the perspective on the world portrayed seems like he is looking through only one perspective. In a sceintific way, rather than several different ways. Xianxia stories possess a distinct charm, and incorporating more of their good elements could enhance the narrative's richness and depth. Perhaps, he reads some fictional books there. This is just my opinion though. I'm not saying he seems arrogant but he assumes his morality and his way of the world is better. I simply want him to recognize he is not in his universe anymore, or at least the genre of the world eventually. And humble himself as well. Overall, 8/10