Comments of chapter undefined of Dungeon King: My Goblins Have Captured Countless Female Players

Just a suggestion, but Ethan shouldn’t be asking every female if it feels good. He doesn’t like confidence, so he shouldn’t have to be validated by asking that and it shows he doesn’t have any confidence in bed. Last suggestion, but the pet names seem like something he wouldn’t say or at least make them better than generic ones. Maybe saying, “my dragoness” instead of baby. Anyway, your story and you don’t need me to tell you how you write. Just keep writing chapters and I will be happy. lol