Comments of chapter undefined of Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires
Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires
Over_The_Moon69
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the author had many advance chapters, so my criticism doesn't needed lol. The author get money for this fic via patreon so i think there will be a small possibility of dropping it
JapaOuO:Dude, I've seen your comment before, so instead of just saying it's boring, make a constructive criticism, say why you're finding it boring, which part you're finding boring among others! or else don't read it, because your saying this discourages the author and there are other people like me who like this more relaxed and paternal part
I don't know why the MC didn't bring back, at least, her mother. He made all the people forget about Robin, he could do the same for Olivia. The admin only forbed the MC from killing the Marine, destroying the WG or forcing people to do what he want. He didn't forbid him from anything else... All in all, in the story until now, the only "bad" thing that I think should be changed is the MC... He isn't making me interested in his development or story at all. The only thing that make me read the story is the premise and what world will be seen. Even if the MC is killed I wouldn't care at all, making him a failure as the MC.
