Drkest
You use the word "and" too much and in places it shouldn't be. Don't start sentences with "and". Other than that I don't see any major problems with the grammar.
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What’s so special about being related to Dan besides Tsunade probably gonna protect and teach him?
Become a KOL for my discussion channel!
Engage with others on the app, and become a moderator for my discussion channel. Let this be a place for sharing with other fellow bookworms!
Please let it be hatake brothers vs the world
while the mc is too pathetic. if Danzo wanted to, he could easily make it his own. logic is out of the chat.
Thanks for the update 🧚♀️
Interesting
Nice chapter
Bro that nickname is sucha dull and bad name
I thank you for the chapter.
Thanks for chapter
