Comments of chapter undefined of Harem in a Labyrinth
Harem in a Labyrinth
Avi2112
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My personal Harem ranking- Roxanne Vesta (Very close to 1st place) Sherry (Because I have not seen many dwarf companions) Miria Rutina (Hate tsundere superior acting elves) Question- Will you add more harem members from other fictional worlds? Also have fun writing both fics but please don't abandon this. It is a very good fic.
I recommend you keep track of how much time has passed since he arrived in this world... Even a rough estimate is good, having a proper timeline is a huge plus when making stories since you can make a progress bar... MC here according to me arrived to this world less than 2 weeks ago. And this shows how powerful and how much mc has done in so little time.
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Read the new story, is meh. Greatly prefer this one. I'm currently making a job list for my own fanfic/original *cries* So much even though I'm ignoring the the modifiers like 'flame' wizard or 'blade' dancer for now. If it's suggestions for harem members the how about mommy-sorry, I mean Ghislaine? Since anyone with eyes can see that Roxanne is clearly not a wolf, beastkin races seem to be generalized. So mommy-sorry, Ghislaine would be a catkin.
That explains the absence, but it's fine as long as you're back! I feel like the time advancement is too slow. I guess you're worried about what his rate of advancement will be and what they will be doing if you time skip for a few months. What did the original Michio spend his time doing? In addition to that you can maybe have him be busy with renovating the property and hiring maids and butlers to take care of everything.
