Comments of chapter undefined of Harem in a Labyrinth

Hey author, i recommend you read the "Book of Authors" here in WN (Just google search "book of authors webnovel")which is a guide on what you need to know, what to do, etc for writing books for Amateurs. There are some stuff that it's best you ignore such as subtle brainwashing lol but the rest is actually extremely useful, just read with a judge's eye and you will be fine. It should take you a few hours to read completely. But it will answer a lot of questions you likely already have and improve your story telling abilities at least 5 times.