Unholy_Dragon_God
The grammar is horrible in this chapter. It feels like some words are randomly placed sometimes.You should try Grammarly to help you, or something like that.
I wrote some paragraph comments highlighting some of the mistakes. They're less common in the latest chapters, but they can put you off a bit during the reading. I don't know how grammarly doesn't flag those errors, considering some are simply grammar errors. I still like the story, it's just that I was quite early in my reading and these passages were annoying.
Unholy_Dragon_God:I've run it through grammarly. And can safely say that the grammar isn't horrible. Maybe you just didn't sit well with the thick writing style I went with this chapter.