Monarch_city
hmmmm, to give a bit of feedback , i like how the story is going so far , but I cant get over the fact how little info some paragraphs contain , one moment he finished choosing the sect , the next moment he is breaking through and directly after he is in front of the sect elder that is going to take him away , maybe give more detail , like he spent the last few days improving his strenge before leaving and then , say the next morning he arived at where the elder was waiting , gives better flow for a story